Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
[x]

deviantART

 
©2009 *Ranceles
:iconranceles:

Artist's Comments

This is another piece i just want to do... I decide to call it My Flaming June cause she has the same color on the dress... I really enjoy doing this one... It took me about 2 hours and is made in soft pastel... Critiques are welcome and advices... Feel free to comment plz, cause critiques advices and comments make me improve my drawings... Hope you guys like it:D

Critiques


:iconyoshiegg603:
a very lovely picture and very lovely colouring all round

background i very well made and makes the picture look very lovely

super work on the skin the tones on it are very lovely and the lighting is very impressive

the body shape and arms look very realistic and have real life shape to it

the hair is very lovely and has lots of intresting colour in it that looks super and the clothes are really lovely with the shadows and shades

over all VERY lovely all round and lots of skill used in this picture to bring out the full look
The Artist thought this was FAIR
7 out of 7 deviants thought this was fair.

:iconesperino:
When I first saw this picture on the deviant update I immediately wanted to see it in full view. The use of colours and the detail in shading really caught my eye 0_0

I have to agree with Duststorm about the background being done after the hair. I know its a natural progression to start with the image first and work with the background later but with fine detail such as lighter colour hair on a darker background it does tend to stand out.

Please don't get too offended by me saying that because even I still do that and it frustrates me too when I realised that mistake. The only way you can really plan for something like that is if you already had a background in mind, but if it was a progression after you completed the image of the girl then I can understand why you did what you did.

I like the use of colours with her dress. It really works well with the dark almost monotone backdrop :) Her right hand looks slightly awkward but the shading and colouring on the piece is really well done. For you to complete it in two hours is very impressive. A very nice piece indeed. :w00t:
The Artist thought this was FAIR
4 out of 4 deviants thought this was fair.

Thank you for your Critique

You are not logged in.

Comments


love 0 0 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconmalroonee:
Just 2 hours? wow that's kinda..fast^^;
i like it very much. i like the skin shading here and on her dress too. you've captured her looks so awesomely.
nicely done on the background=)

Bravo:clap:

--
:crazy:? mmm maybe
:iconranceles:
Yeah i'm surprise :iconsurpriseplz: to!!! When I stopped painting this drawing, couldn't believe that only two hours had pass :wow: this only happens when i listen to music:iconnotesplz: and when i'm sad:iconsadplz:... Well in this case was the music:iconnotesplz: :iconfunnyplz: Thanx as always for the good comments and :iconthanksforfaving:...Your comments encourage me to become better:iconsomehugsplz:... The background give me a headache:stupidme: but i like it :D

--
Cuando Dios te quita algo que tienes "agarrado"no te esta castigando simplemente te esta dejando las manos libres para recibir algo mejor!!! :heart:
:iconmalroonee:
Encourage you to become better=) then i'll always bombard you with comments:lmao:

and u'r welcome=)

--
:crazy:? mmm maybe
:iconranceles:
:iconfunnyplz:

--
Cuando Dios te quita algo que tienes "agarrado"no te esta castigando simplemente te esta dejando las manos libres para recibir algo mejor!!! :heart:
:iconastarvinartist:
Wonderful sense of movement, the peach works very well, great colour choice.
Keep up the great work. :)

--
Realism Illustrates, Impressionism Gives Feeling.
:iconranceles:
I'm honored... Thanx for the comment...:iconsweetsmileplz:

--
Cuando Dios te quita algo que tienes "agarrado"no te esta castigando simplemente te esta dejando las manos libres para recibir algo mejor!!! :heart:
:iconknuxfan09:
this looks great nice job :clap: [link]
:iconranceles:
:iconcuteplz::iconthanksplz:

--
Cuando Dios te quita algo que tienes "agarrado"no te esta castigando simplemente te esta dejando las manos libres para recibir algo mejor!!! :heart:
:iconknuxfan09:
your welcome

and thanx

Details

June 17
1.8 MB
150 KB
600×774

Statistics

9
13 [who?]
250 (0 today)
8 (0 today)

Share

Link
Embed
Thumb

Site Map